Inspired
By: Natalie
Joy
was just sitting thinking about her mom (Charlotte), What was she like? What did she do for fun? She heard the story
but she wondered. Just then she got an
idea .She crawled over to her sisters, Aranea & Nellie. “I got an
idea," Joy said. "You know how our mom invented web writing, well I
going to make a web.” So for the rest of the night they were working. That
morning Wilbur looked up and saw 3 webs that said Joy, Aranea and Nellie. The
people were amazed. They thought a new creature had came. Mr. Zuckerman had spread the news, "A
new creature had came and look inside the tunnel to see try to solve the
riddle.” He made lots of money.
Joy the Lifesaver
By: Isabel
"Wilbur!"
Joy cried.
"What
is it?" he said.
"I
heard Mr. Zuckerman say he was gonna kill you if you got too fat."
"Why?"
and Wilbur started to sob.
"Don't
worry I have a plan."Joy said.
The
next morning Joy had written on the web, but Wilbur didn't notice. But
Zuckerman did. He told his wife about
the web and asked what to do. Mrs. Zuckerman
said "We should let him live."
Mr. Zuckerman was sad but happy that he had an extraordinary pig.
I'm In Trouble
By: Brandon
Wilbur
and the other 3 spiders woke up. Wilbur was still thinking about Charlotte.
Nellie went out to catch some food. She saw Lurvy & Zuckerman talking. They
said, "We should get rid of those 3 spiders." She rushed back home to
tell them the news. So she got home & told the others. Wilbur was
frightened because he didn't want Charlotte's children to die. So the next day
they went out to stop Zuckerman. They scared him & he got the heck out of
there, and that was the last they saw of him. So they all went back home.
Nellie was brave to tell the family about Zuckerman. Even though she didn't get
an award she will always be a hero.
Aranea vs The Gosling
By: Rahil
One
cold night on the farm all the animals were asleep except for Aranea. She had
nothing to do. So she took a walk, when one of the goslings woke up. ''Spidey-
idey-idey!'' she yelled. Aranea got spooked and ran back to the web, but the
bird followed. The goose chased her until they reached Fern's house. Aranea
went through a window. The goose went through the doggy door. The Arables
screamed. Avery got a water gun and squirted the gosling. During the chaos
Aranea snuck out. She finally felt safe.
Adventures of Nellie
By: Eden
Nellie
was at the farm time after time! She met new friends, but one person she didn't
like was the goose. Nellie said to Wilbur, "Goose gets annoyed because she
worked so hard on hatching her eggs. Sometimes I pretend she is not there,''
said Nellie. Wilbur said,'' Tell me about it.'' “Why is it so quiet?" said
Nellie. “Well it is the evening and most animals like me like to take a little
nap,'' said Wilbur. “Well then I want to take a nap too,” said Nellie. So they
went to sleep. Zuckerman said, “Come out! They look so cute.'' Mrs. Zuckerman
came and she said, ''They sound like a baby sheep.” Lurvy said, ”Shhh” to Mrs.
Zuckerman. So they all went to sleep.
The Newborn Spider
By: Bailey
When Joy came down from the web she asked
Wilbur, ”Would you like to explore with me?” Wilbur said, “Yes. When are we
leaving?'' Joy said, "Tomorrow''. When it was tomorrow they were about to
leave until Joy said, ''What about the farmers?" Wilbur said, “They are on
vacation.'' So they left the farm and they put Aranea and Nellie in charge.
They were walking for miles until they ended up on an airplane to Florida. Joy
said, "Wilbur did you pack my flies?" He said, ''Yes.'' It took 4
hours to get there. When they landed Joy and Wilbur found a place to rest. The
next morning they woke up and found a field to play in. While Wilbur was
playing in the
field Joy built a web in an
abandoned farm. When they were tired they went to a fly factory to get some
food, then they caught a plane back home. When they got back he said, ''Thank
you Aranea and Nellie for watching the farm.''
Nellie and Wilbur
By: Phillip
Nellie was the spider who stayed with Wilbur. Over the
years Nellie got older and went on a lot of adventures. Wilbur told Nellie he
wants go with her. Nellie said, "Wilbur you need to know how to fly in
this adventure." Wilbur said, "I can jump far." Nellie said,
"That will do," and off they went. They went to a new mayor's farm in
town. The new mayor in town saw Wilbur. He was surprised! Then he called the
news reporter. She was also surprised to see a famous pig at the farm. Nellie
was happy that she had a famous pig.
The New Adventure
By Drew
One
warm day at the barn yard everyone had woken up. Joy was talking to Wilbur. Then
Mr.Zuckerman was coming, and they saw another pig and it was a girl. When Mr. Zuckerman
got there Wilbur asked her, ''What is your name?'' She said, “My name is
Jinx.'' ''Welcome,'' said Wilbur, and everyone said hello. One day at the fair,
Fern hoped Henry was there. This year instead of the biggest pig, it was the
pig that attracted the most people. Wilbur and Jinx won and Wilbur passed out.
Templeton was eating a snowcone. But this time Wilbur woke up himself. Lurvy,
instead of getting water, got slop and Lurvy wanted to get Avery back for
drenching him with water, but he needed a shower. So he threw the slop on
Avery. Lurvy said, ''Look at slop boy.'' Soon later Joy and Wilbur went to the
orchard and Wilbur ate a big red juicy apple. Later that day lots of people
looking at Wilbur, and then something weird happened. Everyone shouted,
''Earthquake!" No one was hurt so Joy and Wilbur and Jinx found a weird
object. It looked like a rock, but it was huge and glowing Joy said
"Wilbur." Joy saw Templeton, and he was bigger than basketball. When
they were at the fair Wilbur was the smallest, but Mr. Zuckerman wasn't
worried. Joy helped Wilbur win. She said radiant on her web and from that day
on, Joy was thinking of characteristics to say about Wilbur.
The Old Days
By: Sarah
Aranea
was having fun making pictures in webs, but then she got bored. She asked Wilbur
to go to the trough. Areana asked where his food was. Templeton was even fatter
than usual. He was bigger than a ball. Wilbur was thinking about Charlotte. 5
hours later the goose was having a conversation with Templeton. "Here
comes Mr. Zuckerman" said Templeton."He is going to kiss him-im-im,"
said the goose. Wilbur was doing stunts. "Some pig," he said. He saw
3 webs . "Some webs," he said.
Nellie’s Journey to Save Wilbur
By: Jordan
Nellie
was growing up in the barn. She was making a web on the barn , and suddenly,
there was crying noises coming from Wilbur. Wilbur was on the ground choking.
Nellie said, "Wilbur what's wrong?" Wilbur hardly said," I'm
dying." "What should I do to save you Wilbur?" asked Nellie. You
need to sneak in to Zuckerman’s house and get medicine so I won't
die."Then Nellie rushed to Zuckerman's house, and the wind carried Nellie back
to the pen. She raced to the window of Zuckerman's house again , and she made
it. Nellie went into the house, and then she saw Mr. and Mrs. Zuckerman eating
in the kitchen. Nellie went to the bathroom, and grabbed the medicine with her
webs, and put it on her back. She hurried back to the barn, and then it started
to rain. Nellie could barely see Wilbur, but she saw a pink circle laying in the
hay. Nellie rushed to it, and gave Wilbur the medicine. He felt better and was
saved.
The Tragedy of the Fair
By: Branimir
Every morning Wilbur played with his
spider frends. One day Wilbur was getting fair he said, “Will one of you please
come with me to the fair with me?” Just then Joy said, ''I would love to come''
So she hoisted herself down a silk line on her spinnerets and got into the
brand new gold crate.
At the fair everyone crowded around
Wilber's crate. When the judges came they inspected him then gave a gold first
place medal. When they finished Wilber went back into the crate. There he found
a peach egg sack and tired Joy that said that she won't be able to see her
children. Wilber was sad but he knew she was right.
At the barn everyone was sad because of
the tragedy . After a year the egg sack opened and all the babies came out, but
two stayed and their names were Grace and Love.
By: Ashton
Aranea, Joy, and Nellie were
talking to Wilbur and all four of them saw Mr. Zuckerman carrying a hammer to
build a cabin. Then he saw three spider webs under Wilbur's pen. Mr. Zuckerman
thought Wilbur may be frightened. Then Mr. Zuckerman wanted to hit the web then
hit the spiders. “Ugh! you girls should run before Mr. Zuckerman hits your web!”
said Wilbur. While Templeton was sleeping , he woke up and saw three spiders
under Wilbur. Templeton said
“Yummy spiders.” Then
Templeton ran past Wilbur and to the spiders. Mr. Zuckerman saw Templeton and
said, “Huh? A rat, Wilbur can be scared of that too.” Mr. Zuckerman said, “Take
this rat!” Kabam! Templeton said, “Ouch, marble brain." Wilbur said, “Templeton
what are you doing? Are you trying to eat Joy, Nellie, and Aranea?” Templeton
said, “What the heck are Joy, Nellie, and Aranea?” he said. “They're my
friends." “Well too bad, I'm starving,” said Templeton.
“Huddle up spiders, we shall
build a big web to trap that rat and eat and eat him.” Templeton leaped and
Wilbur said, “Noooooooooo!” Then Templeton got stuck in the web. Then the three
spiders ate Templeton. Mr. Zuckerman said, "What in tarnation happened
here?” The three spiders saved themselves.
So Close
By: Kevin
Joy was on her way children. She
saw her children and they were as filthy as a trashcan. So while Wilbur was
getting his buttermilk bath she took some and placed it on her children so they
could get clean. After she got some flies and they fell asleep so she pulled a
piece of straw and they went to sleep. In the morning she could not find her
children anywhere. So she didn't catch anything until she found her children.
When she found them they were with Templeton. That furball I was so close in
bed.
The Lost Spider
By: Edris
One day, Joy saw a fly almost hit her web. Joy was very hungry, so she
jumped onto the fly. The fly flew 1 mile away from the pig pen. By
the time the spider’s venom made the fly sleep, it was night. When the fly
slept, Joy drank its blood. After the blood drinking, Joy wanted to know
where she was, so she crawled everywhere until it was bright then she was still
crawling around. When she looked one way, she noticed that it was the
wrong way. Joy went another way. It was no good. Joy tried
another way, and it was no better than the last. Then she went in the
last way, and she found the farm. Wilbur wanted to know where Joy was
last night, so he asked a lot of questions.
Joy’s Adventure
By: Preston
Joy
was wandering outside the barn. She kept walking and then she was in the
forest. Joy saw a wild fox.
The
wild fox said, "What is your name?"
She
said, “Joy. What is your name?".
The
wild fox said, "Spike.”
Spike
asked Joy where she was from and Joy said a barn. Joy and Spike were
looking for food, but they couldn't find anything. So Joy went to bed but
Spike kept looking. The next day Wilbur noticed Joy was missing so he
went looking for her. Spike found a deer for his food and Joy found a fly
and she wrapped it and ate it. Wilbur heard her voice and ran as fast as
he could, but she didn't see him. So Joy and Spike kept walking.
They found a pond, so Spike drank from it. Then Joy heard a voice and she
walked over and there was Wilbur. She said, "Hi" and Joy and
Wilbur went home. But Spike was upset she was leaving. So Joy stayed and they
played games and Wilbur went home and before he went to bed he got some warm
slop. Joy was getting older. By the time Wilbur was home Joy was
getting older and older but she still was able to play the games. Spike
was getting sleepy and he fell asleep. Joy had 3,000 baby spiders.
A lot of them left but at least 4 stayed to enjoy the forest. Joy and her
baby spiders went home and Wilbur got to meet them.
Aranea's birthday party
By: Mason
One
year later Aranea woke up exited. She wrapped a bee up in her web.
She was happy that today was her birthday.
She
woke up Wilbur. Joy and Nellie were going to through her a party.
She into the room and everyone yelled SURPRISE!! She was surprised. She
had fun. They played games and had fun.
She
got presents. She got a balloon. Night came and everyone fell
asleep.
Joy’s Adventure in the New World
By Leila
Joy was playing with her sisters. Wilbur said, “It's
time to eat my slop.
And here Lurvey comes now.”
“But I am not hungry,” said Joy. And then a
rainbow came by and Joy said, ”What's that?”
“It is a rainbow,” said Wilbur.
“I never saw one before. Well, it is beautiful, isn't
it?” Joy said. “I want
I want to see the world’s things before I die.''
“Well, you have a long time til you die,” Wilbur said.
Then a big storm hit and it was a big one. Joy
flew in the air and bumped into a tree. Wilbur had to call Templeton to
get Joy. Templeton went to get Joy. “Joy!Joy!Joy!''said
Templeton.
“Who's Templeton,''said Joy,
''Wilbur's friend come out from where you are.''
''Here I am.'' Templeton found her and took her
home. Then Wilbur had all three children back again.
Dear class,
ReplyDeleteI love all the additional chapters to this classic story. Eden, I enjoyed your story about the animals taking a little nap. All of the students have such great imaginations and I really enjoyed the vivid pictures you paint with your words and quotes. Keep up the great creative writing everyone and have a splendid summer!!
Eden's father
Robert - Maryland
Dear Third Graders,
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I have absolutely enjoyed reading all of your blog posts during the past two months. Your writing skills have evolved very nicely. Be sure to continue working on this skill over the summer and you will undoubtedly be awesome writers in Fourth Grade.
Secondly, the final Charlotte's Web chapters you all have written, above, were very well written and were chocked full of imaginative thought. The clarity of your writings enabled me to visualize every aspect of your creative conclusions. Superior work!
I look forward to reading more of your literary prowess (be sure to look this word up) over the summer!!
Mrs. Hudgens (Bailey's Mom)
DeleteDear Mom,
Thank you for that nice comment for all of us.
Sincerely,
Bailey
Great job Third Graders,
ReplyDeleteIt is very refreshing to see your interpretations of the final chapters of Charlotte's Web. Your writing skills are awesome. Keep up the good work and have a great summer.
Eden's Grand-Parents
Robert & Patricia Rhodes
Dear Third Graders,
ReplyDeleteYou all have evolved into such great writers! I have truly enjoyed reading your blog posts over the last couple of months.
Reading your added chapters to the story shows your creativity and your expressions shown in your writing! I love all the quotation marks. I can visualize and hear each of you reading your chapters aloud!
Keep up the good work and have an awesome summer. You deserve it!!
Ashton, I am so proud of you!!!
Sincerely,
Ayesha Hall
(Ashton's mom)
Dear Third Graders,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your all of your blogs immensely. The topics as well as your ingenious (August Vocabulary) responses kept my interest and made me inquisitive (August Vocabulary).
You had a rigorous academic year. As a result of your hard work and productivity, you have successfully completed third grade (CONGRATULATIONS!!!). Enjoy your summer vacation. Have FUN and BE HAPPY!!
In August start preparing for Fourth Grade by reviewing third grade work, continue writing, practice next math level.
Have A Great and Safe Summer. Enjoy your family and friends,
Sincerely,
Dr. Marcee Cohen
(Bailey's Grand Mom - in PA)
Good Morning Third Graders and Teachers, (Oh, Parents you too. Smile),
ReplyDeleteCongratulations! You made it through a rigorous academic year, and what appeared to be a never ending winter. Today is your LAST day, so say bye bye to the 2013-14 school year by singing "Happy"!
I know how everyone's emotions about the last day of school. Students and teachers (not necessary in that order) I sing along with you "Because you are HAPPY". Parents I FEEL for you, because you may not be as "Happy" that summer vacation as started. I will sing along with you, because you are "HAPPY" that your child has completed the rigors of third grade (Oops and you too)!!
Everyone rest and relax now, September will be here in a flash. Bring on FOURTH GRADE!!!!
Have lots of "HOT FUN IN THE SUMMERTIME" and A SAFE SUMMER!
Dr. Cohen
(Bailey's Grand mother - PA0